Tuesday, 11 September 2012

Journal #1: Long-Form Audio Documentary


Swimming with Piranhas 
By Mike Greenwood for BBC World Service. 

Documentary length: 23.27 minutes.

Brief summary

The documentary is about Chaco, a region in Paraguay which is known for its natural beauty but is facing the challenge of deforestation and industrialization. The title of the podcast, “Swimming with Piranhas” is a play on words. He refers to the fact that he was mingling with developers who are seen as environmentally destructive piranhas.

The narrator described uprisings in Paraguay including the president’s impeachment as a side note, implying that political instability is not new to the region. He also shed light on the ethnic backgrounds of the people in Chaco, alerting the listener that many people there come from German descent.

Throughout the documentary he provided two sides to the story, informing the listener of both the environmental conservationist’s perspective and the developer’s perspective.

The points he raised were interesting, however I felt that the documentary was too long and drawn out. I lost interest at times but regained them at other times. The statistics he presented us with were interesting though. For example he mentioned that the Chaco may be completely industrialized by 2013, which is worrying considering how beautiful the landscape is according to his descriptions.

Audio Quality

The audio quality was excellent. Interviews were noise free most of the time, unless they were deliberately in public in which there would be the noise of the hustle and bustle in the background.

Natural sound was used effectively. At the very beginning of the segment, he described that he was moving through a forest and to compliment that there was the sound of branches being cracked, birds chirping and water flowing in the background. The sound of a motorcycle engine was often heard in the background, aiding the fact that he was on the move.

Narrator’s Voice

He sounds like a wildlife commentator, almost like Richard Attenborough. There’s calmness to his voice but it’s also pitchy in order to keep the listener’s attention. His voice isn’t monotonous at all and is engaging throughout the documentary, even if the subject matter loses focus.

Writing Quality

At several points, he interestingly explained the dichotomy of untouched environmental beauty and modern development. He did this by using imagery to describe the beauty of the nature and interviews with developers to gather their reasons for changing the landscape. His use of imagery was very fitting and placed the listener in his shoes.

Documentary Length

I’d say the documentary was a bit too long. He could have cut out several of the interviews and just kept the most crucial or engaging ones.

Beginning and Ending

The documentary began with the narrator explaining that he’s climbing through a forest while describing his surroundings. This is a surefire way to draw in the listener’s attention. The documentary ended with hard hitting facts followed by a short conclusion of his findings. One of the facts he raised is that the equivalent of 2,500 football fields are deforested every day.

Website Navigation

The BBC World Service website is very easy to navigate; all the podcasts are on the page and are ordered by date.

Other Observations

His music selection was interesting. He used a South American sounding selection of songs at times, perhaps Paraguayan. Other times he used church chants which fit into the context of him explaining residents' religious German background. His use of imagery gave me a visual impression of what the region looked like. I later looked up images of the area and they weren’t too different from my preconceived impressions.